During this week we each went round the class and watched each others music videos so far. From doing this each group gave us feedback on the strengths,weaknesses and the improvements that could be made.
Some of the main strengths we received was that it was typical of the genre and the themes were clearly shown in the narrative part of the music video. My class mates also said that we used a variety of shots, angles and had a good amount of movement which made the video more visually appealing compared to it being quite static. They also said that the main thing we did well was our casting, they felt that the boy we had used for the artist and the tramp in the narrative worked well as he looked like someone who would appear in a Indie music video. They also said they he was very good at acting and his lip syncing was very believable for the audience. Another strength was our use of editing, people said that they liked that we overlapped some of the shots and it was typical of a music video. As most of the class mates said they liked our use of editing we felt as though we should add more of the overlapping. Overall we got quite a bit of good feedback however we were also given improvements.
Some of the improvements we were told to make was that some of the shots didn't always cut to the beat. This was a problem as this is conventional of a music video, we found this hard because the song was so slow and didn't always match with the length of the shots. Another improvement that was suggested was that there wasn't enough shots of the girl and the parts where we showed clips of "behind the scenes" confused the audience as they saw two girls. However I didn't really agree with this feedback because we made clear that the shots of behind the scenes were in a red tint and the narrative was in black and white which would help stop confusion. The final main improvement we received was based on the colours and lighting. Some people felt that there was too much colour going on and the lighting was contrasted too much between the narrative and performance. We agree with this comment so we have decided to make the performance shots darker so they match with all of the locations and we have also decided to make the red tint a bit darker so it matches more with the black and white used in the narrative.

